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Post by herecomesthemoney1 on Sept 10, 2008 18:18:12 GMT -5
We don't want to waste our effort, we need to finish the song. Any ideas for the chorus?
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Post by brody3 on Sept 10, 2008 18:57:37 GMT -5
no sorry really out of idea
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Post by Ty Del Rose Fights 4 Justice on Sept 10, 2008 19:03:19 GMT -5
i'll get on it tonight...i've just been so busy with rhetoric 101 and all my other college classes i will try and think of something though
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Post by Ty Del Rose Fights 4 Justice on Sept 12, 2008 19:51:17 GMT -5
All right i guess this is the final chorus, steve and i wrote it together, what do you guys think:
She can freeze me with her smile, Hypnotize me with those big brown eyes. For her I'd walk a thousand miles, And you know it's no surprise. She's everything I want. She's everything I need. She's everything I'm searching for. She's everything in me.
what y'all think??
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Post by herecomesthemoney1 on Sept 12, 2008 20:17:57 GMT -5
I don't want this to slip away from anyone reading it, so, guys, please give us your opinions.
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Post by brody3 on Sept 12, 2008 20:20:58 GMT -5
i like it
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Post by Toshiro Yamamoto on Sept 14, 2008 14:05:32 GMT -5
Cool
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